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100 words challenge

June23

But it was far too hot….

Sun beating down on the desert
Scorching the red sand dunes
Lakes now a dry bed of dirt
Stranded there for many moons

Cold night and hot days
Makes living there rough
Sheltering from the hot sun rays
Learning to be tough

Water deep beneath the sand
Under the parched rock
Water is scarce on this land
Only the lone cry of the hawk

Animals toughened for survival
Learning the ways
Each one of them a rival
Staying under the suns haze

Living in the desert is hard
But not impossible
Essential resources are barred
Better to live tropical

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“100 words challenge”

  1. June 29th, 2014 at 7:44 pm      Reply Lisa Team100WC Says:

    Hi,
    I really enjoyed reading your poem, it was great to see you use the prompt in your title, but could you have used it as a final line or elsewhere? You have used some great imagery and descriptions. Well done!


  2. July 6th, 2014 at 6:10 pm      Reply kpsphoebe Says:

    Wow! Great poem. I like that it is unique. I would of never guessed to do that for the challenge.


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